Sample critiques of novel manuscripts

TREWYN BAY – a thriller/romance by an author whose work is improving rapidly and will soon be ready for publication.

THE REMNANT – review of an “agent submission pack” (letter to agents, synopsis and the first 5,000 words of the manuscript) for a literary novel by an author who is just starting out writing fiction.

STAGE FRIGHT – a Light-hearted romance by a very talented first-time novelist.

MALAY GARDEN – “Agent submission pack” review of a work of literary fiction that is very nearly ready to submit to agents and publishers.